Comments : Forgotten Satisfication. //I only Dream it.\\

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice poem...I loved the way u wrote it and I think that I got it well..

    Forgotten Satisfaction.
    Do I need to scream it?
    Never, never again...
    That was my favorite part...Keep up the good work..And wish ya good luck:)
    Take Care..

  • 16 years ago

    by AUBREY MBAVE

    The poem is good

  • You wrote this one very well, i could tell you wrote it from the heart! I can see when you write your poetry you put everything into it! I love that very much!! Keep that smile on your face because you will get through it trust me, I went through all kinds of shit so ya if you ever need me I am here for you sweetheart!! I want to get to know whose behind all this wonderful poetry<3

    DantexStone

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    :) nicely written

  • 15 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Brilliant