Frozen Heart

by Lauren   Jul 11, 2008


My heart is frozen,
Basically steel,
I am full of hatred,
I cannot feel.

My trust was ripped,
From my chest,

I closed my mind,
I closed my heart,
I didn't want to risk my love,
For someone else's warmth.

My tears ceased due to frost,
Not another ever dropped.

My blood grew cold,
I started to freeze,
I stayed inside my shell,
So no one could hurt me.

After a while my heart grew frosted,
Then it became completely solid.

I cannot cry,
There's not much to heal,
I am completely ignorant,
To what I feel.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. amazing as perusual. 5/5. i love your description and the rhyming was awesome. yet again i can relate ^_^ very raw and powerful poem. keep it up. ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Onlywith time pain can heal. I like the way you expresses feelings and thoughts. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    Really good. I like how you used your words.