Come and break the heart

by Finalgravedigger   Jul 11, 2008


( Another minute poetry i know not one of my best but plz read and hope u enjoy^^)

Quietly crawling the heart breaker comes
Silently whispering high sadistic hums
Grinning to loves fresh dead scent
Waiting to cast the veil of torment.

The victim lays just moments away
Simply wondering aimlessly as emotions stray
So vulnerable its hardly a fair game
To fight for loves cruel delicate name.

It's time as the prey no longer shrieks
The heart has fallen beyond any weak
Veins no are no longer pumped with vitality
As the oval coarse heart in us takes reality.

As the blade swings perceive it's shape
lust controls us like any stupid ape
Envision the reflection on a heart breakers sword
Many love out of greed with benefits to look towards.

Empty words of " I love you" are simple toys
To destroy filled hearts is someones joy
Stare at the joke the naive believe
Look what the true meaning of love receives.

Countless spit on the ultimate prize of life
Cursed souls are created from this strife.

Now with a final stab through the heart
watch all hopeful dreams crumble apart
Where is the sound of loves clear beat?

It's all buried in a heap of virtuous defeat.

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  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Amazing....
    it was so beautiful (:
    i loved it!
    5/5
    :D

    p.s thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by LitxUpxWithxLife

    I have one word...WOW! That was amazing man. I heard your words well, but FELT their meaning even more. It's hard to find good poetry now days but you do an excellent job. Love and Lust are hand in hand and i love how you point out how many people just say the words without feeling their true meaning. That end stanza was flawless. Great timing to end the poem and with perfect finality. (5/5) Only thing i see wrong is spelling errors but who cares, poetry is about passion and emotion not rules. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey i love this poem its flow is great and it is very discriptive i also loved the vocab you dont often find people who can write the way you do 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This poem had awesome vocabulary, and flowed so beautifully with a rhyme that was NOT forced, which is hard to come by these days. So many people force their rhymes, and I don't think you did that here. Which is great. XD Great poem, very well written.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Nicely worded and i love they way it had the feel of real love. not my usual cup of tea but it surprized me (in a good way).
    great job.
    5/5

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