I can imagine how much u hate him...It's too bad to get hurt but it only leads to Hate or Revenge...
Ur poem showed ur anger and I think the way u wrote it was good..
I liked it..
Good job,plz keep it up:)..

You make your hatred very clear in this poem. I like your style of freeverse. Nicely done.

<3 Stefanie

P.S. you should put this under the broken relationship poems. It fits better.