My Promise

by SashaMirage   Jul 11, 2008


I should end this now
Its not like I belong.
Lie and say you love me
Like you've done all along.
Its written on your face
that you live in my pain.
Each and every day
i live my life in vain.
You made so many promises
that you did not intend to keep.
You promised to be here for me
but while I cry, content, you sleep.
You think I'm en-caged
because of this ring.
But I have to tell you
that you forgot something.
I am not the girl
for you to push around.
I have no chains
I'm forever unbound.
Even if I stay in your darkened jail.
You'll never break my spirit.
I promise you will fail.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This is another beautiful write. Behold the power of simplicity (: I know many women can relate to this piece, which is a very sad reality. But the message you are portraying as a strong individual is a great one, that should be recognized. Great job, not much else to say!

    Keep writing
    down the bones,

    `Nova

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    One of the great poems i've read from you...what you said are really true..i hope everyone can read this to let them realize that everything is not that easy...superb!!

    keep it up..

    ^__^

  • 16 years ago

    by Ria

    You have a unique way to form endings,they really catch my eye.Very good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello sasha
    I loved your piece and the simplicity in it =)

    but while I cry, content, you sleep.
    I like this line a lot, guyz always do this :D hehe, we cry in bed and they spend the night laughing and giggling !!

    I love the last line a lot, shows the strength you have, sad poems here always end in tragedy, this one was different :)
    very well-written hun
    Keep it up
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Great poem
    and wonderful spirit you have
    i guess some guys just don't realize that treasure (girl) that they have...am sorry for that

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