Wow sasha, this ist the best poem I have read so far, I really can feel your suffer and you make it so real.
well done, may allah bless you.

Great poem
and wonderful spirit you have
i guess some guys just don't realize that treasure (girl) that they have...am sorry for that

Hello sasha
I loved your piece and the simplicity in it =)

but while I cry, content, you sleep.
I like this line a lot, guyz always do this :D hehe, we cry in bed and they spend the night laughing and giggling !!

I love the last line a lot, shows the strength you have, sad poems here always end in tragedy, this one was different :)
very well-written hun
Keep it up
xxxx

You have a unique way to form endings,they really catch my eye.Very good poem!

One of the great poems i've read from you...what you said are really true..i hope everyone can read this to let them realize that everything is not that easy...superb!!

keep it up..

^__^

This is another beautiful write. Behold the power of simplicity (: I know many women can relate to this piece, which is a very sad reality. But the message you are portraying as a strong individual is a great one, that should be recognized. Great job, not much else to say!

Keep writing
down the bones,

`Nova