Comments : I can do it

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I could truly hear your voice in this poem, i found the line

    wrold.......if i had to pick her or my boyfriend i would pick her...b.c friends last longer then boyys do....

    HILARIOUS, and in many cases can be true^^.

    The spirit and the message in this poem is great. If this is truly happening to you i wish you all the best.

    however i do not believe this to exactly be a poem it was more of a rant to me. I do not mean to insult you. it is simply my opinion. Nice write overall^^.

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Really good poem