That's how i feel when....i come on here...sometimes

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So now I'm begging you,
somebody please inform me
of all these things I'm missing;
all these things I cannot see.

This is really good, your feelings are expressed well in this poem, and I enjoyed reading this. Nice work, keep it up!!!!

So I am completely in love with the way your write poems. I really am, I envy you gabby <333 :DDD so amazing with the way you write.

I feel like this a lot. Like you can't write down everything you want to say fast enough, and then when you do the rhymes are simple and it's just not what you wanted to say. It was a lovely poem though, Gabby. ^.^

Very relatable. You can somehow make people see from your point of view when you write poems. They can see inside your mind and really understand you, or at least that's the impression the poem gives off.

Great job!

Cayce xx

P.S. Sorry, my comments are very good right now. I'm tired and my brain isn't working. XD

Good poem i really liked it

Good poem, interesting..