Comments : Razorblade Conversation

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I'm not sure if my interpretation of this piece is correct but if it is...then good god!...and if not then hell yeah!, either way it i was absoluletly enthralled..loved the structure, just awesome.. going in my favs. and i dont have very many in there..wonderful write.
    john

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a sad poem definatly, and I loved how the title reflected truely waht the poem was all about. I love how it was an actual conversation.. 5/5

  • I agree once you've cut with the blade your a slave to it the rest of your life. i just recently broke free from my old cutting habbit i'm finally free but it took me two years. great expression through the poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This poem is rated too low... (first thought that came to my mind)

    This is not quite a tradicional poem, so it becomes quite hard to comment on formal aspects... :)

    the theme is something really easy to relate to... that conversation lasted two years(and a couple months) with me and i still can't be sure if it is really the end of it...

    i really liked the poem... it is a very original way of relating to a quite sad subject...
    5/5

    *isabel*