by XoXoBriannaoXoX Jul 11, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Im sorry that you hurt me.. |
I sorta know how you feel... it sucks. 5/5 |
by Jaimee
I liked it. But, like the others said, it needs a bit more stucture. But other than that, great poem. |
by Amber
Please get the ryming together and the structure of your poems together. This is sooooooooooo sloppy...Sorry but just giving my honest opinion here. |