Well trhis one is way better then the previous
structure is good and some rhyming soo this one is a good improvment

keep up

I like this poem but.. after a few days and a guy says he loves you.. then leaves you, obviously it means they never had strong feelings and feelings of love cant be there the first time u meet someone... but u may like them..

Wow that was so beautiful

Yeah... this person relli broke your heart. you dont diserve it. 5/5

The ending needs to be changed a bit and the genre but it was very good