A fool

by SilentSuicide   Jul 11, 2008


You walk around in your mask
hiding behind a curtain of your lies
your true face
a disgrace

You smile and laugh
make her feel good
pull out the wonders
as any good man should

Yet behind closed doors
you touch yourself
in your head
another girl
your true feeling
suddenly revealing

You look into her eyes
hold her to you tight
make your way inside her
make love in the night

you reveal to her your mask
you drag her off your stage
wrap her heart in your curtains
trap it in your cage
your final act
The thousand swords pact

You played her heart
too never be forgiven
made your way inside
to hell your driven

she cut your curtains
burnt down your stage
her eyes scream tears
her heart hollars rage

was that all she was?
your little pleasure tool
well look at you now.
a coward
hiding behind a mask

was that all she was?
your little defenseless tool
well It's time to cut the act
Because your just her little fool.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Just fair (3/5)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice poem:)
    I loved the meaning and the story line behind it. I thought the flow was a little off and it sounded almost like a spoken word to me. So I guess if you were performing it, it would have been awesome! My favorite lines were:
    you reveal to her your mask
    you drag her off your stage
    wrap her heart in your curtains
    trap it in your cage
    your final act
    The thousand swords pact
    ^^
    I loved the theater vibe you through to it, and it was very original nice job
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Was that all she was?
    your little pleasure tool
    well look at you now.
    a coward
    hiding behind a mask

    was that all she was?
    your little defenseless tool
    well It's time to cut the act
    Because your just her little fool.

    these was my favourite lines.i enjoyed reading poem,especially the end of it was so strong,i think some girls can relate this poem for theirselves (for example me!what a luckiness ;( )... anyway :) the passion just flow :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me

    WOW! Is all i can say. I've read some great love poetry before but never one this passionate and intense. I felt all of the emotion in this poem. great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww! Beautiful work! Its so cute and romantic! You can just feel the emotion! Awesome work!

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