He's won the race! (four-versed poem)

by Invited   Jul 11, 2008


Hit the ground
With trainers like hooves;
Not a sound
Till one proves.
He's won the race!

Sighs and wind,
Tapping laces
One's not kind;
When he takes his paces.
He's won the race!

Legs like tigers,
Running wild
Face like tigers;
Wind not mild.
He's won the race!

Concentrating,
It's almost
Breathtaking;
See's the flags on post.
He's won the race!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I really love this, you wrote this beautifully and I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You make me smile Chinwe..this is such an endearing write:)
    Just keep posting girlie....you have a unique style and that is all you need to start with.
    You will be able to perfect it as you go:)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Osita

    Excellent work!

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