Comments : He's won the race! (four-versed poem)

  • 16 years ago

    by Osita

    Excellent work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You make me smile Chinwe..this is such an endearing write:)
    Just keep posting girlie....you have a unique style and that is all you need to start with.
    You will be able to perfect it as you go:)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I really love this, you wrote this beautifully and I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it!