A well written poem. I liked the last verse the most, although the closing comment brought it all together.
It added some beauty to the saddness 5/5

JIM

I love this poem from the beginning to the end. Every stanza holds amazing elegance and beauty, and I think that you portrayed your emotions excellently. Whole 'rose' metaphor is great. This piece is very vivid. I like the rhythm and flow that you created, they're serene in a way.

The first stanza is my favorite one, it pulled me deeply into this piece. I can relate to this poem in a way which made it even more powerful for me. Beautifully written.

P.s- welcome to the club :)
Keep up!

Nyell

I really enjoyed this metaphor rich poem both with and without the explanation. Nothing but nothing is permanent even friendship unfortunately.

Very sweet, beautifully written :]