Ok ok... so I have some criticism :-P
The double spacing is frustrating me haha
Who bothers to write
while tired and drained
who can each day
sensitively reflect and retain
who oozes pure happiness
over simple little gains
who cries like a child
when love gets a little strained
who composes poems
walking in the rain
who sends love verses
while riding in the train
who drowns himself in love
like addict on cocaine
who puts all his stake
fighting a losing game
who cherishes me
like slow sips of champagne
who licks my wounds
and hides his own bloodstains
who richly emotes artists
who have gone insane
who has me falling in love
all over again
^^ I think "sensitively" Kinda takes your rhythm away... so I would take that out.
^^second stanza "while riding in the train" I would say... while riding in trains. Flows better also.
^^ Maybe it's a typo but "like addict on cocaine" I would say "Like AN addict on cocaine"