Comments : As long as i love you

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Model

    WOW!
    That poem is really strong. It has a lot of feeling in it.
    Great write!
    Byes!

  • Great poem...I really like it :]
    God job!

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Nicely written..u greatly expressed ur feelings..nice work..keep writting!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very very good poem!
    one suggestion
    make it into stanza's it makes it look neater and less overwhelming
    other than that i loved it! honestly ! i loved he line "i never changed for you,i admit,but i really changed because of u" it is a very good point or way to word it
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Good no great job. 5/5. amazing. ~KM~

  • Very Good poem you need to get you structure together its all one big paragraph kind of confusing to read there were also a few grammar mistakes but overall very good write strong emotions keep up the good work! 5/5 Caleb

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Awesome..alot of emotion!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Alot of strong emotion in this piece, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Speechless ...
    excellent job 5/5