I love you

by smiley   Jul 11, 2008


I love you with my heart
I love you with my soul
My love for you is unbreakble
The way I love you will make people jeolose
I love you no matter what
Not even god could stop me from love you
My love for you is bigger than world
Your the best think that ever happend me

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow!! so sweet. I just love it... Nice job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Awwwww love this poem great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    You exspressed very well. -5-

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "The way I love you will make people jeolose"
    ``Jealous not jealose.

    "My love for you is bigger than world"
    ``Add the between than and world.

    "Your the best think that ever happend me
    ``You're not your.
    ``Thing not think.
    ``Happened not happend.
    ``Put to in between happened and me.

    Overall, a pretty good poem. Cliche, but that's no biggy.. because all love poems are cliche. You expressed your feelings oh-so-well, but had some grammar mistakes that were very obvious - Not good. I guess work on the flow too, there wasn't much of one here. 3/5.