Love...?

by Amber   Jul 11, 2008


Love, isn't it a wonderful thing
I mean it makes your heart
complete. It makes everything
better. It's like a new start.

I don't know what you're talking about,
but you're totally wrong.
Love is a temporary feeling,
it doesn't last very long.

Love is an everlasting feeling
it always stays with you,
Remember your first kiss, that
special kiss between you two?

That first kiss was a trap,
pouring emotions within the heart,
spreading throughout the body,
that first kiss is where the poison starts.

Or so you think. A kiss is magical.
Your first kiss fills you with emotions.
Your heart leaps out of your chest
and swims in loves deepest oceans.

Loves deepest oceans?
Those are simply lies.
The poison blinds the heart,
putting illusions before the eyes.

Illusions? Sorry dear but I think you're
delusional. The only illusion you may
see is cupid shooting you with an arrow.
Making you fall in love is cupids pay.

That arrow was like a chain around my heart,
it took away my breath.
Squeezing it till suffocation,
there's no escaping loves death.

So in a way I see that we are
both right. Love does cause pain
at times. Sometimes love makes you
sane and other times it makes you insane.

I see your point,
you're absolutely right.
Love can be deadly,
or it can create the most amazing nights.

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So this is a collab between HvN and I.
The odd numbered stanzas, which are stating why love is good, have been done by me.
The even numbered stanzas, which are stating why love is bad, have been done by Hvn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love this poem its truly beautiful (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Hey i like this poem :] lol