Comments : Gruesome story

  • 16 years ago

    by namless unactive account

    Its good, seriously homegirl you got talent!

  • Deep with feelings. good job.5/5
    **lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT
    great job!

    ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    OMG!!!! LIKE, I can't even begin to explain how....good this was! OMG. I'm .... just lost in words. EXCELLENT JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by Happy And Lonely

    Omg...is this true, its sad sorta

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    I love this one I'll add this in my Favorits (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by pending

    This poem is full of emotions.
    Loved it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by JESSICA

    The best i've read so far! :,)

  • 16 years ago

    by shymira wright

    Loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow.... truly amazing. my favorite lines were

    I remember when we kissed
    I remember the taste
    I remember when it started raining
    Outside was so dark
    This was the worst of enemy's
    I remember the times we shared

    that is so deep, beautiful sad poem hun. i loved it