by keithnwv Jul 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Just a few days ago, I read a profile on here . It really got me thinking. What she must be going thru losing her husband in war. I tried to capture what I thought she would be thinking. The rhyme and rhythm are bad but I hope the words and meaning are right. Crystal Rose, this is for you. |
by Dean Kuch
I hope these words now I write... The reverse syntax threw me off a bit in this particular line, Keith. My mind kept wanting to read, "I hope these words I write now." |
by Em
Keith, such a moving piece. |
by Em
Keith, such a moving piece. |
by LittleMsPink
Well, that was surely a beautiful piece, youre such a talented writer <3 |
The title pulled me in , it was so beautiful but I was in awe of the poem. She had to have been thrilled to the core to read something so amazing. So glad I read it |