Thats so beautifully written ,and I am sure if shes read it herself she will be touched.My heart goes out to her.

I really have no words for what you have done with this . You must have looked in my heart and read it there. I thank you so much for something I will treasure always.
You captured my feelings and penned them to perfection. Thank you dear man for this .thank you

Certainly you've done great thing by writing this poem. It's great thing to feel for others. A wonderful poem. Very well penned.

A beautiful poem, really tugs at the heart. Lovely gesture too. 5/5

Keith,
You have penned a tribute to the love two people shared. Though death may depart us temporarily, the love we shared during times together will be magnified in the gloryland. I pray for Crystal Rose and her loss. I come from a military town and know realistically the effects of losing those with love so tragically in war. I also know that they do it for us and for reasons like this < to write poetry and so many other reasons. People in other countries are condemned for displaying their emotions like the lot of us do here on a daily basis. Thank you sharing your dedication to Crystal Rose with the rest of the community.

Beautifully written
and just the thought of you writing it for somebody you dont even know and how you captured the scene aand so much more

i think you are a craing person and i would love to read more of your poetry i also think we all have all have sadness in our life but the sadnesses we go through are also part of the path we took

keep up the good work!

brittany :]

For someone to write a poem filled with so much emotion based on another's pain is wonderful!!!you're talented!!! don't stop writing!!!

Awww..this was so sweet of you..and it gave me a tear...
so beautiful!! so touching!! so awesome!!

I really really enjoyed this...5!

I want to say well done first off. It means alot to me to see someone be touched by anothers words. I read the intro and i can't imagine what she's going through. She must be heartbroken and feel like she's lost half of her soul. That makes a tear come to my eye just thinking about it. i'm sure she appreciates this beautiful poem you have written for her. The next thing....beauitful imagery. I especially like the last stanza. When you think "crystal rose", to me, i would see crystal red flower petals that could break with the slightest touch. A good name for the poem because it may also describe how her heart feels. you done very well with this....do write more....i look forward to reading them.
~*~Amber~*~

Beautiful as always. It brought tears to my eyes. Nice one Keith. 5/5

Well, I hapen to know this girl, she is in my club!
A very moving tribute to fine lady:)
It made me smile to think there are men out there who do such really sweet things:)

Hugs for you, for being such a sweetie:)

5/5 Ingrid

Wow this was such a beautiful and moving piece. it was so touching and really went straight to my heart as i read it. it was just so inspirational in a way i guess, it shows how everyone is fighting some kind of battle and when you think things have got to their absolute worst you hear or read about someone who's battle makes yours look like nothing. you did such a beautiful job. don't ever give up on your writing!!!! i would love to give you more than a 5 because you totally deserve it!!! this poem goes straight to the heart of the reader.

Dear keith: You have written a lovefilled poem. Right from your heart. Good write. Love, Janjan xoxo

This poem is very inspiring. I know a lot of people can relate to it. The rhyme scheme helps it flow really well. Awesome job, and thanks for the comment.

Very well expressed. 5/5

Excellent poem, thanks for sharing.

The poem is beautiful and the meaning behind it even more so. the last stanza was by far my favorite. great read 5/5

This is a beautiful poem you penned for Crystal... So touching, and heartfelt. You're amazing... A true poet, who shares and touches hearts :]

This actually brought tears to my eyes. You've penned something so touching it's really hard to comment. Well done