Comments : Beaten and Hopeless

  • 16 years ago

    by Faye

    This is a deep poem. You did an awesome job.

    I liked:
    As I cut my fear has fled
    Crimson droplets will be bled
    I watch them fall and hit the bed
    The past is rushing through my head
    This pain somehow, must be shed.

    I know how it feels to bleed out the pain... An awesome poem though... keep it up..

  • I feel this way sometimes. and the pain i feel is the only pain i know sometimes. great poem! keep it up>
    **ada**

  • 15 years ago

    by divine divinity

    So expressive of the torment inside. Superb.