This poem was really good. I liked it a lot.

"In their perfect little dance
every doll has its perfect match,
just like Barbie and Ken...
But my Barbies danced with Ken after Ken,
and ended up with another Barbie..."

^^ Ah! I loved this part. It was different, but really cool.

Your choice of wording was really good in this piece, also.

5/5

-Briana

Yet again another brilliant poem and yet still conveying a message to the rest of the world of the beliefs that you have in life. I believe that this is a good read for all even though very much different from the usual. Excellent work! 5/5 from me.

"holding tight to someone I didn't love"

I really liked that line for some reason. I loved this poem. I thought it was really good. Everyone should stand up for what they believe in, and this poem is just your way of showing that to the rest of the world. Good job!

OMG! I love this poem... I thought I was the only one! Ugh... even thinking about going to clubs where everyone is doing that makes me feel horrible inside... and my girlfriend loves it. God, it's a relief to know I'm not the only person who feels this way. Great write! and I'd give you a high five for saying this to so many people! They all need a smack in the face!!!!! haha 5/5