Comments : LOCKED-My crime and punishment

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Chinwe,

    Without the interpunction you poem would look ever better;)
    Nice poem, I hope this is not about you, though!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Wow I loved this, it was a beautiful work. Although it may be short, it holds alot of meaning. And you nailed it with just so many words. You show that you must pay for you crime, no matter what, and the punishment for it can be deadly. Even so.

    good work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Osita

    A very artisic vision to relate to.

    Au Revoir!