lol. I agree, good job. It's unique alright... this gives me an idea... :P
Aken Sol

extremely cool poem, i loved the falling add in. good work, oh and to aswer your question about my poem slither and why its in the friend section. first of it was hard to plave this poem in the beginning anyway but i chose friendship/other because

in this poem we are all creatures(snakes if you will) that live for survial. (much like a snake)this poem gives advice to watch out for the unaware
(or another snake ) because a strike from behind can be death, if your not paying attention. liken it to being stabed in the back by a friend. so watch out for it.

Very romantic. I always look for the romantic poems, they seem to be the one that elude me the most.
Very nice work.
-Peace

i enjoy your poems. i hope to read new ones soon.

This was a real different style... What ever... the poem is simply sweet....