Nice poem, great flow!

I think there was a spelling error in this stanza:

if only
you could awaken
and not be mistaken
from you drunken fury
and put memories in your head that aren't dark or blurry

Is "from you drunken fury", suppose to be "your drunken fury?"

other then that, great poem, 5/5

Nice poem, great flow!

I think there was a spelling error in this stanza:

if only
you could awaken
and not be mistaken
from you drunken fury
and put memories in your head that aren't dark or blurry

Is "from you drunken fury", suppose to be "your drunken fury?"

other then that, great poem, 5/5