Invisible mask

by Tangible heartache   Jul 12, 2008


I am smiling can't you see?
Don't you know?
But no one sees the real me
I can't let it show
You see this is a mask
Everything I hide is under it
It's such a simple task
That is something I admit
I don't let anyone see
I can't let anyone know
Who is the real me
That it's only a show
Keep on walking
Don't give me your time of day
Keep on talking
But don't give me a say
Because I won't listen to you
Until you notice me
But that you will never do
I am invisible, don't you see?

Written by Makalah July 12, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by CrossCut

    Very heart felt poem; you really packed in the emotion right until the end. I can relate in a way and I really like this poem. Keep writing 5/5 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautiful write, but very sad.. most people feel alone, even in a crowd, but they just need to find themselves. :) Good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    I love the honesty and truth..
    and the last line, asking someone to see the invisble-ness.
    good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    This is a poem I can really relate to and it is so true. You have emphasised emotion. Excellent structure!
    5/5

    ~Chins~
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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I am very impressed here specialy the last line you askl him to see an invisible things in you

    you knwo somtiems i can read screams in the eyes
    i would read million line from my girl that no word can she would never say !!
    i can see over her mask even she try to make it invisible
    :)

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