I liked this a lot. I would have preferred it be longer, for it would be easier to "critique". But I thought this was beautifully written. :]

5/5

-Briana

A short and yet well written poem. It's hard to comment on this one because it's so short but I think that it was really good and even though it was quite short it still sent a message through. 5/5

Short but so meaningful. Your words were so true and again, you wrote this so well. For such a short poem, you can still say a lot!