Comments : Why

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I'm sorry darling...I know it is so confusing and hard at the same time...

    P.S
    I breaks my heart that you are doing this....It should be "IT BREAKS"..
    Good job,keep it up:)
    Take Care..

  • 16 years ago

    by Decks213

    You got some talent going there.. I have read a few other that I will comment on.

    I know the feeling my marriage ended the same way but life continues on... you are young and well there will be more people to come. Believe me I know the feeling.

    But great job on your writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo

    I am sooo sorry hun that that happened to u...i am goin through the same thing as we speak...it will get better...atleast thats wat they keep tellin me...

    but the poem was great and welll written...good job...

    and i have a few new ones to..idk if u commented on them or not...