This poem was wonderful. I loved it. The rhyming was perfect, and your word choice was good, also.

5/5

-Briana

This was a really good poem. Everything was perfect, but one thing got me: in the first two stanzas, the first and third lines rhymed, while the second and third rhymed, but in the last stanza, the first and second ones rhymed and the third and fourth one rhymed. I thought it was somewhat weird, but it's easily overlooked. That was the only thing, but maybe it's just me? Ha, don't answer that. ;)

This was excellent.Short but sweet.It's really straight forward to me and something I can relate to as well as many others I'm sure. 5/5

This is beautiful, well-put and yours words were so sweet and heartfelt. Really loved this, your rhyme and flow was flawless. Good job.....