by H E Losey Jul 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Deep within the recess of my mind |
Oh wow.. "Deep within the recess of my mind." That was a wonderful line, and it rhymed very very nicely with all the lines.. everything in this poem was well written. There was a amazing flow to it, and a great deal of repetition that did the poem well. :] 5/5. |