Hey Hun...great job!! This was a good poem! The only thing I suggest...is...since in the 5th stanza, you made it a question....I think you should have put "will you never" instead of "You'll never" because then it'll be a question. Although, it IS your poem and it is good...I'm just making a suggestion. lol. Anyways, I'm sorry and good job!! Love you bunches!!
Amy