Aww thank you. I love what you wrote for Tina and I. Thank you very very very much I really love this poem. It feels like, well know what I wrote? About the broken fairy tale reading it was like you wrote the happier side to my broken fairy tale. Makes me feel that things will get better for me even if at times I feel like it won't.

My gosh! i love how you write poems. Its wonderful how you put your feelings like that. Keep writing.

I really love this poem :) its amazing. urs are way better then mine..
Keep writing hun :D

Thank you for this poem. it made me feel better just reading it

Hey Charles that was a sweet thing to do,and the poem itself was really well written.The only thing i'll say about it critically is that i think it would have been even nicer if you seperate your poems into stanzas sometimes especialy if its in rhyme . But thats only a suggestion your poems are excellent either way

Grant

That was good!
wonderfully writtin
5/5
Lex

This is a very cute poem, nice to read, and flows well. Keep up the good work.

WOW YOUR AN MAZING WRITER

That is just simply beautiful!

Great poem... i wish all friends stayed

This one is lovely. Your writing is very artistic, its like a painting. I dont know how to describe it.<3

I liked this poem. It was well written and I like your style. I don't believe you have to separate your poems into stanzes to fit a particular mold. Write however feels natural to yourself. The great poets of our time did not follow rules on how to write their poems. They just lets the words flow and come out of their very souls. I feel as though this poem was flowing from yours. I liked it a lot. I look forward to reading the rest of your poems.

btw... your poems are msot recent than mine... I have had serious writer's block for quite some time. But if I post any new poems I will be sure to let you know. I am adding you to my favorite authors. I hope that is ok.

Take care! write as you see fit.

A.

I always love your poems. This one was beautiful. You are an amazing poet. It all flowed masterfully and sounded wonderful.
5/5
~Kayla