Who's laughing now

by ryan   Jul 13, 2008


In the beginning everything was great
we were happy we were perfect
then we started to fight
and thats when u started to collect
the little pieces of my heart
that you broke off
you would say i love you baby
you would even say i care
but deep down inside you were laughing
at all my worries and fears
nothing i DId was right
nothing made you happy
and that made me sad and depressed
till the day i pressed really hard with that blade
and blood came out and so did the pain
every scar came after a fight till the day you said u wanted yous space
so i went home that night ran a cold bath
and took my blade and ended it all
now who's laughing I'm pain free
all the pain i was in
is now on you
i hope your happy that you pushed me this far
now I'm in gone far far away
look who's laughing now

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  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is really intense and powerful. It flows really well..but its really sad. Its soemthing alot of people are goig to be able to relate to..so nice work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    Sweet poem dude!! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sorinity

    I love your writing. it always has such a powerful mesage. this is probably my fav so far. very deep kind of dark i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by CareBear

    Well written =]
    but very sad. Isn't love complicated & painful.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow! this was so deep.. can can't believe how much pain ur were in.. am sorry that u were or are hurt cuz of that person.. but i love it how u rote it =). awesome job.. take care =)

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