This piece seemes to be quite a common cutting poem, imho. there were some things that caught my attention though. the way you tell a story, as if talking to the main hero of the story, is great. also i liked this part:

"What did I ever do to get this in return?"
this will teach her a lesson she hasn't learned.

i thought you could have developed it a bit more.
another thing is the way you tell the story. very calm, not kinda "hysteical", and it's good. because the image of blood and suicide is too emotional, and if you were like "oh no, oh my god, it's so painful, etc", it would be just to much.
rhythm is thorought, wording is quite good, but somewhy it wasn't a poem to touch me. but well it's just my opinion. don't get mad at me for criticizing please:)

Well lizaveta is right about cutting poems being common.. but those are usually the kind that i love to read. not because i like that that stuff happens but because it reminds me of myself at times and the way i feel.

you did a great job with your expressions.. the first line immediatly caught my attention and kept it throughout the entire poem.

and the way you ended it made it even better. good job with this one. i dont see a rating yet so yay im the first to rate it lol. and it deserves a 5/5 :)

I don't care what others have said, I truly like this poem. Yeah, this subject has been written about many times, but each person brings their own voice to each poem and that's what makes each one different. Suicide is a touchy subject for me, because I lost someone very close to me to suicide and it was because of something I did. So, this poem is special to me. I'm adding it to my favorites.

Well, it looks like a lot of people are saying it's a common poem.. but theres's always that one thing that makes a poem better than all the others. I think you did a excellent job with your word choice here and you kept my attentino throughout the whole poem... so I can't say it's a bad poem at all. Just because it's about cutting/suicide/ and such... and is such a common topic around this site to write about, I can't downvote it. It's a wonderful poem and I think you made it your own in a way. 5/5 {{Sorry, if I made no sense. :)}}

Well...my opinion...u did a very well puttin it in words. yes it kan be common. But its the wordin and the way that certain people kan put things...certain people kan put it in very different ways but it depends wut kind off situation u r tryin to describe...i dnt kare wut the others say either i like thz piece. U knew how to express it and how to put the wordin...alot of people have a hard time puttin things in words. But i understood wut u ment...and i dnt agree to much with suicide..yes life kan be too much to handle sometimes but it kan get better and u shouldnt just give up..anyways nice piece :)

Well...my opinion...u did a very well puttin it in words. yes it kan be common. But its the wordin and the way that certain people kan put things...certain people kan put it in very different ways but it depends wut kind of situation u r tryin to describe...i dnt kare wut the others say either i like thz piece. U knew how to express it and how to put the wordin...alot of people have a hard time puttin things in words. But i understood wut u ment...and i dnt agree to much with suicide..yes life kan be too much to handle sometimes but it kan get better and u shouldnt just give up..anyways nice piece :)

You got me captivated with your 1st line.This poem was indeed beautifully crafted into a sad poem. I must say that the choice of wrds that you used such as throttle really brings the poetry to life. I also like the idea that you insert the thoughts of the protagonist's mind into the poem. It just create this intense moment while you're reading it further.
I have to say that i absolutely love this poem

Excellent job
5/5 from me