My perfect wedding

by natalie   Jul 13, 2008


Clear blue skys
palm trees towering over
miles of golden sands
the sun over looking
the radiant seas
everyone gathered around us
silently watching
as we say our
chosen vows
as we make that special commitment
everyone cheers
and congratulates us
as we say i do
and as our lips touch

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great entrance ~

    Clear blue skys
    palm trees towering over
    miles of golden sands

    I like the poem. Please check only-Commitment and congratulates, I think it's due to the program MS word configuration.
    5/5!

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