by smiley Jul 13, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
What love a specail felling |
by Barbara Jean
Sometimes you cant explain that feeling(love) |
I honestly can't figure out if this is in english or not, and I'm wondering if you're foreign. You mispelled "special" and "feeling." Also, I find it much more poetic to use proper grammar and construction than saying "ur," I just feel that it helps with flow. It's nice to put together a few lines quick, but I also thought that a lot of these things have been said. And of course, most things "have been said," but it depends on how you say them. You said them how everybody else said them. |
by NoUr
Nice try..keep writing |
by Yeka
Love your poem keep up the wonderful poem (^_^) 5/5 |
by LilBit
Good Job.. |