Nice job

This is a good poem. Just a few things to fix. Reread your poem and see the grammatical errors you made. Other than that is was really good.

Oh, wow. I love it.

Good Job..
Great Description,
Its So True & Real!!
N A Short, Sweet, & Simple Way..

Love your poem keep up the wonderful poem (^_^) 5/5

Nice try..keep writing

I honestly can't figure out if this is in english or not, and I'm wondering if you're foreign. You mispelled "special" and "feeling." Also, I find it much more poetic to use proper grammar and construction than saying "ur," I just feel that it helps with flow. It's nice to put together a few lines quick, but I also thought that a lot of these things have been said. And of course, most things "have been said," but it depends on how you say them. You said them how everybody else said them.

Sometimes you cant explain that feeling(love)

~5~