by Dan Bloom Jul 14, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
Dancing in a crowded room |
by Renee
Yeah, I also liked the line exchanging names, numbers, and innocence. I think I've heard it somewhere else though. But it's still awesome and that it's true. People like that are odd. And those relationships never last. Meh j rambled |
by Lizzi
As do I. |
by Renee
I like it |
by RetroRavey
I would tell you which was my favorite part but I don't think I should put your whole poem in this comment. I'm not usually sucked into a poem, but that poem pulled me in and kept my entire attention span until the very last sylable. There was one line that stood out to me the most: |