Bleeding Heart

by P00ki3B3ar   Jul 14, 2008


Your love use to be wholesome and sweet,
you use to give me kisses on my cheek
and tell me that you love me dearly

You use to make my heart skip a beat
but now all you do is make me bleed.

Crimson red tears are all that lie left
on the ground that use to say
you and I forever,
now in end it comes to be
a brokenhearted trend of misery blame.

Now its hard to walk a worn path
that use to be a love that was suppose to last.

Your face never seems to leave me whole,
it only seems to break me more,
all I wanted was your love
instead you gave me the door.

Now here I am alone and fragmented
malfunctioning viciously
without you
broken without hope
now in the end
do you dare to be despair?

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  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    I agree with both Goth marionette and Julie Raab. What goth marionette had said that you didn't keep the rhyme, but poems don't have to rhyme. it was really good! you're a really talented writer!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alleycat

    This poem reminds me of so many of my old relationships......and this is a really good poem....I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    All I wanted was your love
    instead you gave me the door.
    Now here I am alone and fragmented
    malfunctioning viciously
    without you
    broken without hope
    now in the end
    do you dare to be despair?

    Those words affected me the most...they were really so touchable...U didnt keep the rhyme but I see it was awesome..
    Keep up the good work..

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