The Twisted Deceit

by P00ki3B3ar   Jul 14, 2008


Black and white in her twisted mind
shame and pain in her wasted ways
love and hate in her heart
her soul confused and misused
she wishes to be free
but still yet to be
She loves him so
but every time she gains hope
It seems to be mislaid
A crimson door of desolate
rejects her strain
whispers of bliss
truce her allegiance
heavens-hells angels
drown in tears
leaving there to see
truth is told to be
her whole ideal life
was only a twisted deceit.

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  • 16 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Wonderful Melissa, really wonderful, sad touch, but really sadness was expressed good

  • 16 years ago

    by Carolina

    Wow. that was amazing. i really do love it. your a great writer. keep it up! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by LilBit

    Deep,
    Confusing Yet Understanding
    All At The Same Time,
    i Loved It.
    Great Job,
    Please Keep Writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    Wow this poem is amaing. i love how it is sort of saying things without saying them so some is it is obvious but it also makes you think. well done.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Alleycat

    This is a really good poem.

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