That was deep! |
Wow..the poem is so wonderful and in fact the title attracted me to read it..and I loved how u wrote it and I think the flow was good.. |
by Alleycat
This is a really good poem. |
by slighte
Wow this poem is amaing. i love how it is sort of saying things without saying them so some is it is obvious but it also makes you think. well done. |
by LilBit
Deep, |
by Carolina
Wow. that was amazing. i really do love it. your a great writer. keep it up! <3 |
Wonderful Melissa, really wonderful, sad touch, but really sadness was expressed good |