Comments : The Twisted Deceit

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    That was deep!
    nice!
    <3
    Lex

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Wow..the poem is so wonderful and in fact the title attracted me to read it..and I loved how u wrote it and I think the flow was good..
    Keep up the good work..

  • 16 years ago

    by Alleycat

    This is a really good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    Wow this poem is amaing. i love how it is sort of saying things without saying them so some is it is obvious but it also makes you think. well done.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by LilBit

    Deep,
    Confusing Yet Understanding
    All At The Same Time,
    i Loved It.
    Great Job,
    Please Keep Writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Carolina

    Wow. that was amazing. i really do love it. your a great writer. keep it up! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Wonderful Melissa, really wonderful, sad touch, but really sadness was expressed good