Rain splattered window

by Tangible heartache   Jul 14, 2008


I miss how you kiss me
I miss your hugs
I miss you, can't you see?
But all you do now is drugs
You are so different to me
You ruined me, you made me go mad
You make me cry, you make me plea
My family watches me, it makes them sad
I watched you go from a rain splattered window
It made me sad, it made me cry
You didn't care, but if you did it didn't show
You promised me you wouldn't leave, but that was just a lie
I believed in you
But now I watch from a rain splattered window
You said you loved me, I said it to
But it wasn't something you expressed, nothing you showed
So here I am dying, without you by my side
You said you would be with me; go as far as I would
But I should have seen that you have lied
But I guess I misunderstood...

Written by Makalah July 13, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    It shows how the window has reflected your emotion towards this person. I love it.

    ~Chinwe~
    xxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    The title of the poem attracts me.......
    good poem.........
    well done keep writing.... hope to read more of ur poem soon.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Frist, i would say , i know your feelings, second , i would say , about this poem 2 part ,
    you should break it into paragraphs and then doo some rhyming to it , to be ok

    second ,
    all htat talk about drugs and sad and leaving and lying , jsut make me sad of you to be soo weak to deal with this,

    girl love is beautifull and pretty thing , dont mess it and mixe it with drugs,

    love is a pure thing and represent the truth between 2 , not the lying ,

    it is not a misunderstanding it si simply not love

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