Dream Me

by Bugg   Jul 14, 2008


Here I am, here I stand
Waiting to take your hand.
Take my hands, watch my face
Baby, let's get outta this place!

Let's run away, let's be free!
It'll just be you and me.
I don't know where we'll go,
That's something only we'll know.

Hurry up, drive real fast,
Baby, you and me, we'll last.
Let's drive with the top down,
As we wave goodbye to our hometown.

Stopping here, stopping there
Life's a breeze and without a care.
Las Vegas is just ahead,
Elvis can marry us, even though he's dead.

This all sounds good, sounds so great,
Me and you on a life-long date...
It's a feeling you just can't beat.
This feeling of being dreamed off my feet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww! Cute! I really enjoyed reading this piece. It is well-written and very well-organized. Thats what I liked about it the most. I also really love the originality of it. Great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me

    This was so beautiful. i love it so much. the flow and sturcture were so good. this poem touched me so deeply. i'm adding it to my favorites. 5/5 keep wrighting

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    This was such a refreshing poem. I've read so many sad poems on this site lately, but this one was so fun. I'm glad that you wrote this. The Elvis line was great XD. 5/5 For sure.

    btw Thank you for your comment. I really do appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Everyone has own way to express their thoughts and u probably one who can truly express in different way,, i could picture the words and all the lines was absolutely very dedicated and it touches in my heart.. i love the way u write.. its perfect flowing and it written so well.. keep on writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A good piece well written with a lot of good imagery.
    "Baby, let's get outta this place!" - I don't feel like the word “outta” really works hear out of would be more sophisticated.

    Except for this the poem was very good until the last stanza which I feel let the whole poem down I really feel it was more the last line the rest seemed to be really good. A good piece but could be improved upon. 4/5

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