Sadly depressed and confused

by Tangible heartache   Jul 14, 2008


Her time is almost up
Her time is ticking
She is about to give up
Nothing is clicking

She is sadly depressed and confused
There is nothing she can do
No one has said a word
There is nothing she can do for you

Time is on its way
Time is about to go
But time is all she has
But yet, it doesn't show

She is sadly depressed and confused
She is slowly dying inside
Can someone please help her?
But that's something untried

Her heartbeat slows
Although she is dying
She doesn't give up
Unlike you, she is trying.

Written by Makalah July 14, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    This is a very beautiful poem that brought so many feelings and emotions to my head, I really connected to this poem in my own special way thank you very much for writing this. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm , good poem nice ryhming the feelings inside are confusing as the title

    but to adress the reader as she is not luike him ti si kind of humiliating , soo , i dotn prefer it