Broken heart

by J u l e s   Jul 14, 2008


Do you feel better now
To know you put me on the bottom of the ocean?
You put me down there in a broken dream
Of lost passion and devotion

Is it something worth a smile
For you to know you broke my heart in two
As if it were not fixed
Only now you want to fix it with a little bit of glue

How can you still hold my hand
When you know how I feel about you?
Does it make you feel better to know how easily I fall
This pain is something you can not undo

I wonder how you felt
When you found out I had cried
I cried so long through out my day
For my world had started to collide

Until you unbreak this broken heart
Tell me you love me so I can feel okay
Let me believe something so untrue
Because one day I will throw all those lies away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Marie

    I think the poem is very good n well written. it seems very emotional though

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Julia this is amazing, honestly. Definitely one of the best things you've written. the emotions were very clear...the last stanza was my favorite by far...absolutely lovely, babe. *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Keep writing, it makes us all feel better when we're down, and better still when we're feeling good

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    This is really sad! really good though.
    Sweet and true.

    Just one mistake:

    "This pain is something you cannot undue"
    ^^ think you mean "undo"

    But great work.
    xx

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