by Sole
Overall, a well structured poem. I hadn't thought of using this rhyme scheme, and it looks difficult to follow so great job! |
by Michelle18
Awww this is a sweet friendship poem.. it reminds me of my best friend.. i liked this one .. but i didnt like the style you chose. it just made it difficult for me and i didnt like how it rhymed and then in some places it didnt. it was just confusing.i dont know if that was because of the style or just because you chose it to be that way. but other than that i thought it was an okay poem.im not going to downvote it because i didnt like the style. so im still giving it a 5/5 because i think your wording and the concept was beautiful. :) |
Excellent poem. It was everything I'd wish to hear about a friendship. The person is always there for the other, they make you happy and brighten your day, they listen to you no matter what, ect. ect. You nailed this one.. definatly. Some parts you worded very uniquely, I thought. The flow was good, and was easy to follow along with. Great write. 5/5. |
Very well written reversed triquatrain to express real feelings so eloquently |
by S R P
I can't seem to stop with just one of your poems. I particularly liked the style you used in this one- I don't get to see this too often, especially so elegantly written. The topic of the poem is also one that many of us can relate to. Overall, it was a great poem. |