Aawwww.......thats a strong and Very sweet poem and written excellently i realy love ir , so cute and full of true deep feelings and emotions and the words were so sweet =] great poem !! keep up the good work =] 5/5

This poem is full of emotions. But the structure is not that well. I think you should do that in a better way.

Wow 5 really though question , i doubt he can answer those ,

but the frist paragraph jsut got to me good ,

and touch me good ,

i think it is a great poem ,
but in structure wise i would say it need some wor with rhyming , and line lenght

:)

but over all due to teh intese of the poem i beleve no one will notice :)

Nicely done.

Very sweet , especially i like ur fraze
"I'm so tired of trying to be
who you want me to be
When all I want to be
is myself."
5/5

I can relate to this poem. nice work 5/5