Ignorance

This poem was definatly a wonderful write. You explained this person as being ignorant, and I would have to agree with you. One thing I didn't like was before you even began your poem you told us what you thought of your poem. Don't do that. Let the readers read your poem and then come up with how they feel about it. I've been told that because I used to do that, and you really shouldn't say that..because you are kind of making the readers think that the poem is terrible, when it really isn't. I don't know. I've been told that, and would just pass that on to you. :] Anyways, this poem was wonderful overall. It definatly described the person well that did the dumbest things, and I guess ignorance made him do the things he did. Drugs, drinking, etc. ect. The things that make a person ignorant. You definatly got the point you wanted to get across here, very clearly.. by repeating.. that he was ignorant. Very very true. :] All people that drink and drive, do drugs, etc. ect. are very ignorant in my honest opinion as well. I liked this poem, it brought a great message across. 5/5.

Oh wow. this was very good. an enjoyable reading i say.lol. anyway it was great and explained alot bout the world today. 5/5
**harlea